Tuesday, March 25, 2014

Design Critique – Paper from Fifty Three


Compatibility: Requires iOS 7.0 or later. Compatible with iPad.

Description:
Paper is a good idea-keeper. It can help users to capture the ideas as sketches, diagrams, illustrations, notes or drawings and share them across the web. Paper’s interface design is very impressive for me. I want to demonstrate it in three aspects: visibility, consistency, and conceptual model.

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DESIGN PRINCIPLES
Visibility
“Paper” has a high degree of visibility, which allows the user to work out the current state of the system and the range of actions possible.


For example, when users swipe the screen, the journals will slide to the left or right, the journal which move to the middle will move close to users (it turns bigger). Users can understand that this journal is which they can edit only and immediately. Users can recognize every journal by the name beyond it, and also can get the current state of the page numbers.
Fig.1 visibility
When the journal move to the middle, the small “i“ on the top-right corner of the journal will show up, which will remind users that they can edit the setting of this journal. There are three icons under the journal, which is very easy to understand as the functions of “delete”, “export” and “add a new one”.

As an app for drawing picture, when users enter a single painting page at first time, the tool bar will show up without slide the screen. I think this is also a very thoughtful visibility design for new users who are unfamiliar with this app. Users will not get confused when they start experience this app at very beginning.
Fig.2 visibility of tool bar
What’s more, the small plus sign will show up when you are at the last page of the journal and you slide it to move to the next page. This small sign is very reasonable for users to get a feeling of where they are.
Fig.3
Consistency
This application is internally consistent. Every journal you create has the same structure. Except those journals, the information windows keep a consistent style, such as “Welcome Guide” and “About Paper”. They have same size, same layout, and same fonts.
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Fig.4 (c)
Besides, there is a collection of good paintings from other users, which named “made with Paper”. Since this is a special part of this app, “made with paper”, keeps a very good consistency in this app. Even it doesn’t look like a notebook, and you cannot open those pieces in full-screen; but the same design of fonts, the similar gesture experience, and the unique animation effect make “made with Paper” fix well in this App.
Fig.5 (a)
Fig.5 (b) 
Conceptual model
Paper presents a perfect conceptual model, which allows the user to build up a true picture of the way the system holds together. Users can add, update and delete the journal in the app. In a journal, user also can edit, add, update and delete every page. For every page, users will have several tools to accomplish their pictures or notes.

Besides, this app maps “undo” with a go-back-in-time clock, maps “zoom out” with a magnifying lens, which are very decent conceptual models.

As a new painter, I always want to undo the lines I made. Instead of using the small undo arrow to achieve this function, Paper designed to accomplish “undo” by a gesture, which asks users using two fingers contra rotate on the screen. On the other word, users can also use two fingers to rewind to any previous point in time without leaving your flow. It is not only convenient for us when draw pictures by fingers, but also making a common sense of “back in time”, which is an essential meaning of “undo”.
Fig.6 (a)
Fig.6 (b)
Users can zoom out the details, like a magnifying lens. This function gives users fast access to deeper levels of the drawing, without losing the place on the page.
Fig.7 
What’s more, users can close a journal by pinching it, page turning by simply swipe it. Tap and hold a single paper, users can pick up a page or journal, pinch and swipe to navigate while moving.

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Fig.8 (c)
Affordances
This app provides property of objects and environment, which allows users to perform an action. When look at every pen in the tool bar, users can have a perspective, and imagine what kind of stroke the pen has.
Fig.8
The mixer, also meets users real-world experience. The mixer is perfect when users paint between the shades. This is a very natural way to mix beautiful colors, and users can hold the color they create to save it in the palettes. 

Limitations:
When I want to close the small window of information, I cannot just touch the dark area of the screen to return to the main screen.


53 Pencil's connection is not reasonable enough. If I haven’t used the pencil for a long time, I need to activate those tools by connecting the pencil again. However, what if I lost my pencil?

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